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Question 1: "Jeff - readers of the site will recognise you
as the author and director of the channel4
short, 'Blowing It'. What they might not also
realise is that you are also an established
screenwriter with a wealth of experience
in the industry. Tell us a bit more
about yourself and why you wanted
to become a writer?"
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I’m responsible for maybe 90 hours of mainly prime time television.
This may not sound a lot but it equates to writing between 40 and 50 movies.
This ranges from original pieces, animation, children’s drama right up to the
likes of EastEnders, Casualty, Holby City, City Central and a few others. So
far I haven’t managed to get a film made but each year I have a close call.
Next year will be no different. I got into writing because I originally wanted
to be a great novelist but a huge love of films and the written word
seemed to draw me to screenwriting. Being young and confident in those
days I expected to at least be the next Woody Allen. So far I’ve got the
glasses and the thinning hair. Though saying that I still have high hopes of
one day breaking through. In the meantime I’m very happy doing what I do,
which is writing scripts that get made and shown. I can’t really think of
anything else that I would enjoy as much.
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Question 2:
"If someone is serious about focussing
on a career in screenwriting, what
advice would you give them as they
begin their journey?"
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If you’re really serious about
screenwriting then my advice would be
to start writing. This may sound simple
but I bump into people every week who tell
me they’ve got a great idea or concept and
it’s just the best thing ever and I then ask
them how it’s coming along and they hesitate
and then admit that they haven’t got round to
actually writing it yet. And as soon as they
say that I know they never will. Anyone can
have an idea but to sit there for weeks on end
thrashing it out is the true test of a writer.
I also meet a lot of people who say they don’t
enjoy writing – so why do it – I ask myself.
I mainly do it for the sheer unadulterated
pleasure of it.
Advice wise I would also watch my favourite
film over and over and try and listen to it
as much as view it. Try and split it into
each scene (not the actual frames) and
visualise it as a script and work out why
certain things happened when they did.
Piecing a film together isn’t a bad way to
work out how scripts are written. Generally you’ll
find that in a good film the dialogue doesn’t tell
the story, the plot and atmosphere does –
which is always a good one to learn as quickly
as possible. It’s what they show rather
than what they say. Fantasy is also an
important part of the process, just dreaming
about one day seeing your name on the
screen or on a film poster or even in
the Radio Times isn’t anything to be ashamed of.
Basically re-conceptualise yourself as a
writer and give yourself a goal to aim for.
Even if you don’t win ten Oscars falling short
might have some extremely interesting benefits.
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Question 3:
"Is there a process that you follow when
developing a script? If so, could
you give us an insight into the steps
involved and any other people who might
be involved, such as script reviwers, etc?"
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The idea is the first step in everything.
Get the idea. Write it down, leave it to
simmer for a few days then return to it, look at
it again and see where you can improve it. Then
sleep on it again. Then improve on it again.
Basically let the idea live a little. Don’t just
go mad and start writing. So let it live,
try and get some scenes in your head, some
moments of dialogue, a forming of possible
characters. Make notes then start a relationship
with your idea. If you were dating this idea,
initially you’d be excited but hesitant, then
you’d get to know the idea a little better, then
when you’re ready to fall in love start writing
for real. When it’s over ditch it for something
new. The rules of love apply everywhere. Now
that the script is finished the first person
you show it to is your agent. They read it and
hopefully recall a person they met only last
week over a lobster bisque who was looking for
just such a Romantic Comedy Horror Sci Fi Low
Budget Sleeper Hit like the one you’ve just
written. In Britain and the States people like
to see scripts rather than ideas. I also have
my own contacts that I would send scripts to
but that takes a bit of time to build up.
With regards to what I do day in day out I
either offer a story for a TV show or get provided
with one. We then work on this synopsis
ironing out its wrinkles and bad points. When I
say "we", I’m talking about me and my script editor
who is also armed not only with his/her thoughts but
also those from the Producer of the series and
probably the Executive Producer’s notes as well.
The editor then offers up all the suggestions,
you listen, you either accept or dismiss some or
all of them and then depending on your ability and
your experience you would go straight to first draft.
Then second draft, then third draft and then a
polish. But only if you’re lucky. Rewriting is
the name of the game I’m afraid. Everything you
write could be better. Sorry to say this but a
first draft won’t do. Not ever. It’s just a starter,
a way to find character voices, to see if
the plot works, to try and experiment with
tone and style. It’ll be the most enjoyable
of times but then after that it’s down to the
business and craft of re-writing. If you get 50% or
more of the finished article on the first draft
then you’re doing brilliantly. Of course others
will disagree but I like to work on things until
I’m completely satisfied that I’ve done the best I
can in the time allowed. A lot of people are
reluctant to rewrite because they think they’re
brilliant wordsmiths (as you should do) but in
my business you have to take into account other
people’s ideas as well. It’s the nature of the beast.
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Question 4:
"Robert Rodriguez said that when he writes,
he comes up with the pivotal scenes that
contribute to the progression of the story, and
then he fills in the missing links as
he writes. Do you work
in a similar way, or do you have the entire story
mapped out in advance before you put pen to
paper."
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I piece a script together starting with the
idea and then letting it gestate. Sometimes
I wait a year to write it because something just
isn’t quite right. By then I have a small notebook
of ideas for scenes, small pieces of dialogue
that help round out the character, and always,
always a title. I have to have a title otherwise
I know it’s not going to work. It’s almost as if
the idea isn’t good enough to merit a name otherwise.
I then start writing. Not the opening scene but
a scene maybe a few minutes in. Something that
gets the ball running. And there I stay, writing
constantly, coming up with a batch of new ideas
and plotting it out as I work. It’s only when I
actually write that all the hazy little ideas I had
beforehand wilt away to reveal what I was really
thinking of (not that I knew it at the time).
I aim to write between ten and fifteen pages a day.
Sometimes I sit there until midnight and have
written forty and I can’t sleep such is the buzz
so I get up about five and start again. I try to
write everything without any revision, so that
it’s an ugly misshapen lump that I can then spend
the next few weeks editing and reshaping.
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Question 5:
"Is there an industry standard word-processing
package that is used by writers for formatting screenplays.
If so, do you use or recommend it, or do you use
something else?"
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The best software I have encountered is Final Draft.
It might seem a bit pricey but it is
definitely something you should get.
Scriptware is good until you try to e-mail
your scripts and realise you have to chuck it
into Word before anyone can open it. Most people
I know work in Final Draft so e-mailing is very simple.
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Question 6:
"Is there anything else you would press upon
young script writers that we have not already
covered?"
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The main thing I would impress on new
writers would be to get an agent.
I’ve seen the piles of unsolicited scripts
sitting in people’s offices and it is tall,
uninviting and you can tell people don’t
want to wade through them. Sad to say the
consensus is if you haven’t got an agent then
it’s highly unlikely a production company will
pick you up. It does happen but much better
to come with a recommendation. I would also
enter every writing competition I could.
Log on or subscribe to a writers’ forum and see
what’s going on out there. Write a play, write
a novel, write anything, just get used to the
discipline and craft of writing. And get
yourself noticed if you can. What’s the point
of giving your brand new script to your best mate
who’s a mechanic, try and worm out possible avenues
where someone with some knowledge of the industry
could clap their eyes on your masterpiece.
And don’t be precious about your work.
It will be criticized and it will be torn
apart and you will be asked to start again
on it. But at least you’ll be talking to
someone about it, and if you’re really good
you’ll be getting paid to sit on your
arse in front of a computer for weeks on end
with a big grin on your face.
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